2. Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Children are the future of the nation and how they should be raised, is a debatable issue. Some people believe that they should be exposed to the physical punishment while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
say constant appreciation is required for them. According to me, these arguments need proper
scrutinisation
before forming any opinion.
To begin
with, there are many advantages of conferring rewards
to
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for
children
first
of all; appreciation and verbal praise can have a magical impact on the
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of the children because when they are appreciated for good conducts they come to know about
value
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the value
of good
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and try to keep
continue
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continuing
with that. The more they brim with positive comments, the more they are confident.
On the other hand
, children who are subjected to artificial physical punishment are seen with lack of self-confidence. A survey conducted on
behavior
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the behaviour
behaviour
of children revealed that a child exposed to punitive actions my parents are more aggressive and furious than others of his age.
Hence
beatings to
child
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a child
can never be fruitful.
On the contrary
, there is no denying the fact that training to the notorious and ferocious mind is hard nuts to crack because it is true that rod the only logic for the fools.
Moreover
, some children repeat mistakes even after being warned and punished,
this
type of stubbornness force parents and guardians to give them beatings. Needless to say, over pampering may have
adverse effect
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an adverse effect
on children? In
this
present scenario, parents have one or two children and
this
pampering distract them away from their path. To conclude, children are the tender buds and nurturing them is really a major responsibility.
Therefore
, a fair judgment on
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
is required for good upbringing.

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