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Too much emphasis is placed on testing this days, the need to prepare for test and examination is a restriction on teachers and also exerts unnecessary pressure on young learners. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Knowledge seeking is a decision of choice that demands much time and energy which only takes a strong determination to pursue. Getting ready to write yes and examination in a more excellent way requires lots of stress physically and psychologically for young learners.
First
 and foremost, teachers only impact knowledge into the seekers, whiles it becomes the faith of the students to prove what he or she has
learnt
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learned
 when writing test or examination.
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, academic evaluation is said to be the learner's boss irrespective of their age.
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 the other hand, considering the number of
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generally approved or compelling recognition
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 and unexpected questions to be asked, fear of failing and wasting resources
such
 as time and money created lots of anxiety in the young learners who want to be evaluated. To conclude, night and day reading to perform excellently well in an exam or test mounting lots of pressure on young learners which I agreed with.
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