Home schooling belongs to the past and its unacceptable in modern society. To what extent do u agree?

Home
Education was widely accepted in the past
,
Accept space
,
due to reasons related to quality and distance. Many argue that
home
tutoring should be confined in the past and not permitted in
this
civilized time. In my opinion, I agree that
home
schooling is effective and efficient.
However
, I
also
believe contemporary schooling is important It is known that the
home
is the
first
school a
child
attends. The
home
inculcates
good attitude
Suggestion
a good attitude
and morals in the
child
.
Its
Suggestion
It's
a haven
that is
safe; free
off
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
bullying and racism, reliable; caters for the special needs of the
child
and favourable for learning and skill impaction. The one-on-one interaction between the tutor and the
child
creates room for quality of academic instruction and intellectual development. Statistics
has shown
Suggestion
have shown
that
homeschoolers
score at or above the national average on standardized test
,
Accept space
,
and have been accepted into international lay acclaimed universities, like Harvard university.
On the other hand
, modernized schools possess a reservoir of professionals, well grounded in the various subjects offered.
For example
, the mathematician teaches every aspect of mathematics, and nothing else: the French instructor who speaks and teaches French: the geographer who teaches geography and the list is endless. A modern school provides the
child
with both formal and informal means of learning; classroom learning and
practicals
Suggestion
practice
practical
, and
also
a platform for social interaction, which is Paramount to the mental and physical development of the
child
. In conclusion, though
home
schooling provides a one-on-one method of instruction, which improves the quality of education for the
child
,
Accept space
,
the
child
lacks the opportunity to socialize with its peers as seen in modernized schools, which is fundamental to a
child
's mental and physical development.
Submitted by Esther on

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