Home schooling belongs to the past and its unacceptable in modern society. To what extent do u agree?

Home

Education was widely accepted in the past

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due to reasons related to quality and distance. Many argue that

home

tutoring should be confined in the past and not permitted in

this

civilized time. In my opinion, I agree that

home

schooling is effective and efficient.

However

, I

also

believe contemporary schooling is important It is known that the

home

is the

first

school a

child

attends. The

home

inculcates

good attitude

Suggestion

a good attitude

and morals in the

child

Its

Suggestion

It's

a haven

that is

safe; free

off

connects a noun with the preceding word

bullying and racism, reliable; caters for the special needs of the

child

and favourable for learning and skill impaction. The one-on-one interaction between the tutor and the

child

creates room for quality of academic instruction and intellectual development. Statistics

has shown

Suggestion

have shown

that

homeschoolers

score at or above the national average on standardized test

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and have been accepted into international lay acclaimed universities, like Harvard university.

On the other hand

, modernized schools possess a reservoir of professionals, well grounded in the various subjects offered.

For example

, the mathematician teaches every aspect of mathematics, and nothing else: the French instructor who speaks and teaches French: the geographer who teaches geography and the list is endless. A modern school provides the

child

with both formal and informal means of learning; classroom learning and

practicals

Suggestion

practice

practical

, and

also

a platform for social interaction, which is Paramount to the mental and physical development of the

child

. In conclusion, though

home

schooling provides a one-on-one method of instruction, which improves the quality of education for the

child

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the

child

lacks the opportunity to socialize with its peers as seen in modernized schools, which is fundamental to a

child

's mental and physical development.

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Home schooling belongs to the past and its unacceptable in modern society. To what extent do u agree?

Fully explain your ideas

It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead.

In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples not having children?

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. - describe the item you lost - explain how you lost it - tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

In a number of countries, some people think it s necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.