Home schooling belongs to the past and its unacceptable in modern society. To what extent do u agree?

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Education was widely accepted in the past
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due to reasons related to quality and distance. Many argue that
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tutoring should be confined in the past and not permitted in
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civilized time. In my opinion, I agree that
home
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schooling is effective and efficient.
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, I
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believe contemporary schooling is important It is known that the
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is the
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school a
child
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attends. The
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inculcates
good attitude
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a good attitude
and morals in the
child
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.
Its
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It's
a haven
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safe; free
off
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bullying and racism, reliable; caters for the special needs of the
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and favourable for learning and skill impaction. The one-on-one interaction between the tutor and the
child
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creates room for quality of academic instruction and intellectual development. Statistics
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have shown
that
homeschoolers
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score at or above the national average on standardized test
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and have been accepted into international lay acclaimed universities, like Harvard university.
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, modernized schools possess a reservoir of professionals, well grounded in the various subjects offered.
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, the mathematician teaches every aspect of mathematics, and nothing else: the French instructor who speaks and teaches French: the geographer who teaches geography and the list is endless. A modern school provides the
child
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with both formal and informal means of learning; classroom learning and
practicals
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practice
practical
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a platform for social interaction, which is Paramount to the mental and physical development of the
child
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. In conclusion, though
home
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schooling provides a one-on-one method of instruction, which improves the quality of education for the
child
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the
child
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lacks the opportunity to socialize with its peers as seen in modernized schools, which is fundamental to a
child
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's mental and physical development.

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