Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The modern lifestyle has led to an alarmingly rising rate of
abortion
,
especifically
in distinction from others
specifically
in Southeast Asia
such
as Thailand, Vietnam. Obviously it is morally wrong to conduct
such
action but
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action, but
whether it should be banned legally is yet to settle. Both sides of the argument will be presented below with a conclusion of the writer’s view. In
favor
promote over another
favour
of the prohibition against
abortion
,
this
will certainly make people more careful with their lifestyle and use protection before engaging in any sexual activities. Since people are aware that there is no way out once they get pregnant except bearing the unwanted babies.
This
, in a way, will help with people’s health due to reducing
chances
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the chances
of the reckless sexual encounters as well as post-
abortion
impacts on physical and mental well-being.
Secondly
, the law against
abortion
is in line with moral and religious standards all over the world. Henceforth, governments which pass on
this
law will receive a lot of support to create a better society.
On the other hand
, it is argued that the prohibition of
abortion
would do more harm than good.
Firstly
, it will lead to the appearance of illegal medical institutions because whenever there is demand, there would always be
supply
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supplied
. The unacceptable operation of
such
institutions will rip off people’s money and health as we can see from various heart-breaking examples. The women who suffer from underdog treatment can never get pregnant again or even die on the operating table.
Secondly
, it is true that sometimes
abortion
is necessary in certain situations. For
instances
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instance
, the mother’s health is not good enough to endure 9-months’ pregnancy, and it may cost her life if
insisting
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insists
on giving birth. Or the babies are prescribed to be disabled. In those circumstances, I believe it is better to conduct
abortion
for the sake of both the mother and the babies, as well as the whole society in the long run. All in all, while I agree that
abortion
is morally wrong, we should not ban it totally due to some special cases.
However
, we can pass on the
law
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law, such
such
as
abortion
would only be applied and approved
to
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for
valid medical
reasons so
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reasons, so
that people should be more aware of their lifestyles. It should
also
be noted that sex education starts from
young age
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a young age
since “
preventation
the act of preventing
prevention
is better than cure.”
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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