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Too much emphasis is placed on testing this days, the need to prepare for test and examination is a restriction on teachers and also exerts unnecessary pressure on young learners. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Academic evaluation is an integral aspect of learning process to validate
students level
Suggestion
the students' level
students' level
student's level
 of understanding and competence. Excessive importance has been attached to testing recently, its preparation and writing examination mounted pressure on the young knowledge
acquisitors
.
This
 essay will discuss in details why students should be evaluated.
To begin
 with, teachers
does
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do
 lots of work
by
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of
 preparing what to impact into their students on
daily basis
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a daily basis
, coming to the
class
 to transfer every information necessary for the students to know concerning each subject.
Such
 subjects can be used to test students understanding at the mid or end of the course.
For instance
, tutors
prepares
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prepare
 notes to teach prior to the
class
.
However
, teachers will not prepare or write
examination
Suggestion
examinations
an examination
 for students but, rather examine them.
Furthermore
, students who
attends
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attend
 classes in school has to be examined whether at the mid or end of each term or semester,
this
 will prepare his mind right from the beginning of the
class
 that he has to be serious, both
on
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in
class
 work and the ones to be done at home. One example of
this
 is, a student who spends extra time in studying what was taught in
class
 on
daily basis
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a daily basis
 and read ahead of the
next
class
 to know better.
Conversely
,
students
Suggestion
students'
student's
 level of understanding has to be tested. To conclude,
this
 essay discussed
prominence
Suggestion
the prominence
 given to testing in recent days and the pressure mountings on young students. I believe it is necessary for students to be tested on whatever has been taught, as
this
 will comend the efforts of the knowledge impacter and encourage them to influence more young lerners
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