The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, thanks to the development of technology that allow us to watch news easily.
However
, there are some
agruments
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
arguments
agreements
that we should give more space for good news on the media
instead
of bad news. In my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
tend to agree with
this
point of view at a certain extent. Apparently, reporting more nice information could bring us some benefits which might affect both societies and individuals in
specifically
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specific
ways. One of the main bright sides is that good news like people beyond their bad situation and obtain great achievements or
a
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an
intelligent student take
the high rank
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the highest rank
highest rank
higher rank
in a competition could
encourage people follow
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encourage people to follow
them. Owing to the fact that many people mimic their idols at some aspects,
therefore
,
good news
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the good news
might be a great method to persuade people to do right things.
Additionally
, producers nowadays are focusing on sock
news which
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news, which
can be aggressive users attention that could lead to rising people's depression, tension and anxiety. On the other word, giving too much duration for bad news and neglecting good news is a common tendency today, perhaps, many people are too similar to crimes on media
then
someone might try it as a normal action.
On the other hand
, less good news and more bad things still worth at some points. For the reason that we need to perceive our
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
which affect our lives in both direct and indirect ways. Take climate change as an
examplem
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
, our
wolrd
everything that exists anywhere
world
are changing
Suggestion
is changing
rapidly in a really terrible trend, the way we treat the environment which is the main reason for some horrible disasters
such
as tsunamis, flash floods and droughts.
Hence
, people's awareness should be risen by those bad screens.
Furthermore
, bad news is a common way to warn people from some offensive
activitie
any specific behavior
activities
activity
,
thus
, reducing
criminal
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crime
rate
effitively
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effect
effectively
effects
. In conclusion, good news should be given more space on the media;
however
, bad news still remain as the majority of the media.
Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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