Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reason people do this? Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?

#people #age #reason

As we grow day-by-day, we get old sick and weak.

This

leads to the act of being outcasted for certain people from

certain age group

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a certain age group

Couple

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A couple

of decades ago

this

, People were open to accept

aging but

Accept comma addition

aging, but

now-a-days it is not

samilar

marked by correspondence or resemblance

similar

. They feel

embarassed

feeling or caused to feel uneasy and self-conscious

embarrassed

to accept the fact that as the time passes, they grow old. Aging is nothing but just the process to become old. Is it good or not

Accept space

depends

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depend

ones

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one's

thoughts. Some think that aging is a bad thing and try to fight with it mentally and scientifically. Resistance of it brings

lot

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lots

of challenges

for

example many

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example, many

actresses undergoes facial surgeries to look

young

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younger

, some

alter

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alters

their jaw line while other alter their lips.

This

gets worse when

womens

an adult female person (as opposed to a man)

women

modify their body structure to look attractive.

This

is not just limited to

womens

an adult female person (as opposed to a man)

women

, men

also

work hard to look better and younger. On one hand women alter their appearance while

on the other hand

men alter

thieir

of them or themselves

their

health by eating

lot

Suggestion

lots

of unhealthy

suppliment

add as a supplement to what seems insufficient

supplement

supplements

and workout to develop good physique.

This

not even bring bad

result but

Accept comma addition

result, but

also

worse the situation before

time

objective case of they

them

On the other

hand their

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hand, there

hand there

are some people or to be precise, some artists who

embrase

include in scope; include as part of something broader; have as one's sphere or territory

embrace

embraced

embraces

it. There are some sportsmen are

also

their

in or at that place

there

this

list

for example

Milind

somkar

, an actor of Indian origin turns out to be a sportsman and won titles like Ironman

etc

and on being asked about their age, they always tend to accept openly as they accepted the change from childhood to being young adults.

This

does boost the confidence and accepting

this

stage brings out more

responsibilties

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibilities

responsibility

towards self. In my opinion, accepting the fact of aging is a good idea and skipping the approaches to look young will give you a new stage of life and working on to look young will give nothing but harm to ones body and mental peace.

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Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reason people do this? Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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today because of how busy most parents are, grandparents take care of their grand children a lot of the time. Is it a positive or a negative situation for the grandparents?

Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.