Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think being a celebrity brings more benefit or more problems?

When someone is a public figure, either a well-known cinema artist or a great player of the time, it can be beneficial and troublesome at times. In my opinion, it is tougher to lead a regular
life
in terms of privacy and freedom of everyday lifestyle for a star.
celebrities
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Celebrities
are
most open
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more open
about their daily
life
as they can not keep it low key. Media is always up to publishing every detail about
them which
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them, which
can be humiliating sometimes.
For example
, an actor or actress recently had a
broke
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broken
break
up with their love of
life
and the reports will be broadcasting immediately. Not only their personal
life
but
also
they spread click bait fake news over social media. Same goes for a sports person.
Thus
life
becomes
hard
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harder
for these public faces. Freedom of
life
is another concern for these special personalities. They cannot lead a regular
life
like a general person.
For instance
, they cannot go to public places like shopping malls or go on a vacation with their family as people will be around them for taking photos and autographs which can be disturbing at a point. Sometimes they disguise themselves to move around.
This
is how it becomes problematic.
Furthermore
, at some point, they may not be able to attend family and seasonal occasions, so they miss out
many festivals
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the many festivals
from their
life
. In conclusion, it may seem like that
life
of a celebrity is glamorous and
happening but
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happening, but
it is not exactly so comfortable and easy. They pay a great price for their stardom. So the
life
they live can be tough and intimidating.
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