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Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think being a celebrity brings more benefit or more problems?

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When someone is a public figure, either a well-known cinema artist or a great player of the time, it can be beneficial and troublesome at times. In my opinion, it is tougher to lead a regular
life
 in terms of privacy and freedom of everyday lifestyle for a star.
celebrities
Suggestion
Celebrities
 are
most open
Suggestion
more open
 about their daily
life
 as they can not keep it low key. Media is always up to publishing every detail about
them which
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them, which
 can be humiliating sometimes.
For example
, an actor or actress recently had a
broke
Suggestion
broken
break
 up with their love of
life
 and the reports will be broadcasting immediately. Not only their personal
life
 but
also
 they spread click bait fake news over social media. Same goes for a sports person.
Thus
life
 becomes
hard
Suggestion
harder
 for these public faces. Freedom of
life
 is another concern for these special personalities. They cannot lead a regular
life
 like a general person.
For instance
, they cannot go to public places like shopping malls or go on a vacation with their family as people will be around them for taking photos and autographs which can be disturbing at a point. Sometimes they disguise themselves to move around.
This
 is how it becomes problematic.
Furthermore
, at some point, they may not be able to attend family and seasonal occasions, so they miss out
many festivals
Suggestion
the many festivals
 from their
life
. In conclusion, it may seem like that
life
 of a celebrity is glamorous and
happening but
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happening, but
 it is not exactly so comfortable and easy. They pay a great price for their stardom. So the
life
 they live can be tough and intimidating.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public scrutiny
  • paparazzi
  • financial gain
  • brand endorsements
  • lucrative opportunities
  • platform
  • mental health
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • networking
  • influential
  • perks
  • VIP treatment
  • security concerns
  • stalkers
  • public image
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