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Thanks to the modern technology, there have been enormous changes in the workplace over the past 100 years. What are the most significant changes that have occurred and what changes do you foresee in the next 100 years?

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Cutting-edge technology has modified the business world during the
last
 century, and there are a number of possible changes predicted. In my opinion, robotics and
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artificial intelligence will be the foremost alterations in the workplace after the biggest changes of
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 of the conveyor and
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computers over the past 100 years. On the one hand, there
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 been two paramount modifications during the past 100 years.
Firstly
, Ford Henry devised the conveyor which allowed mass production leading to
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 profuse goods in factories.
Secondly
, computers were introduced into the workplaces and they were improved resulting in facile and accurate computation of
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 problems. Both developments had a deep impact on the business life.
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, I believe there will
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 two crucial alterations in the next century. One of these changes will be the rise of robots in workplaces. Robots are apt to manufacture products accurately without errors.
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, they are prolific and require minimum effort to maintain.
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artificial intelligence will have flourished to supplant
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occupations
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 as doctors and lawyers, which are considered
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human jobs
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 complex cognitional skills. In conclusion, I think conveyors and computers
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 augmented the business for the past century, and
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robots and
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artificial intelligence will
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 it
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 in the next 100 years.
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