In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Peope
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People
have different ideas about how salaries should be paid. Some people believe that salaries should be paid significantly
high
Suggestion
higher
, while some may argue that government
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
create a certain level for
salaries which
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salaries, which
I think I would agree with to balance society and lives. There are several reasons for people who support to pay extremely high salary.
Firstly by
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Firstly, by
paying
high salary
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high salaries
a high salary
, the workers would
work
dramatically hard. They may put all of their effort at
work
as they
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
all of their hard
work
will be paid off. Those
emplyees
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
have more money to support their families,
such
as improve their
children
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children's
child's
education or treat illness in
the good
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the best
hospitals.
Secondly
, the government will have benefit from taxes that contributed from those high incomes. Taxes from these workers would be invested back in some public needs
such
as infrastructure or hospital improvement. As as result, both the
workers and
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workers, and
governments are benefited.
However
, some people may argue that a certain level of salary payment should be required for the aim of social and private balances. If people put all of their energy at
work
they can not
balane
a state of equilibrium
balance
their
work
and live effectively. They
therefore
can not
can not
cannot
work
productively when they
usally
under normal conditions
usually
have to overwork to get higher salaries.
In addition
, people who are usually working hard, they normally have very little time for their families. Many couples have to
divorde
separate into parts or portions
divide
as they have not enough time to care about each other. The
childrent
a young person of either sex
children
of these workers may not meet their parents frequently and
thus
they lose their communicate with family and start to be addicted to some drugs or game online. If it occurs, it will be a threat to our society.
Therefore
, a certain amount of money payment needs to be examined seriously to protect our society. In conclusion, very high salaries can help encourage people to
work
harder to support their families and contribute to
national budget
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the national budget
national budgets
.
However
, a
centain
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
continued
continual
level of payment needs to be set up to ensure people
banlance
a state of equilibrium
balance
their
work
and live effectively.

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