In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Peope
have different ideas about how salaries should be paid. Some people believe that salaries should be paid significantly Suggestion
People
high
, while some may argue that government Suggestion
higher
shoud
create a certain level for expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
salaries which
I think I would agree with to balance society and lives.
There are several reasons for people who support to pay extremely high salary. Accept comma addition
salaries, which
Linking Words
Firstly by
paying Accept comma addition
Firstly, by
high salary
, the workers would Suggestion
high salaries
a high salary
work
dramatically hard. They may put all of their effort at Use synonyms
work
as they Use synonyms
belive
all of their hard accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
work
will be paid off. Those Use synonyms
emplyees
have more money to support their families, a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
such
as improve their Linking Words
children
education or treat illness in Suggestion
children's
child's
the good
hospitals. Suggestion
the best
Secondly
, the government will have benefit from taxes that contributed from those high incomes. Taxes from these workers would be invested back in some public needs Linking Words
such
as infrastructure or hospital improvement. As as result, both the Linking Words
workers and
governments are benefited.
Accept comma addition
workers, and
However
, some people may argue that a certain level of salary payment should be required for the aim of social and private balances. If people put all of their energy at Linking Words
work
they can not Use synonyms
balane
their a state of equilibrium
balance
work
and live effectively. They Use synonyms
therefore
Linking Words
can not
can not
cannot
work
productively when they Use synonyms
usally
have to overwork to get higher salaries. under normal conditions
usually
In addition
, people who are usually working hard, they normally have very little time for their families. Many couples have to Linking Words
divorde
as they have not enough time to care about each other. The separate into parts or portions
divide
childrent
of these workers may not meet their parents frequently and a young person of either sex
children
thus
they lose their communicate with family and start to be addicted to some drugs or game online. If it occurs, it will be a threat to our society. Linking Words
Therefore
, a certain amount of money payment needs to be examined seriously to protect our society.
In conclusion, very high salaries can help encourage people to Linking Words
work
harder to support their families and contribute to Use synonyms
national budget
. Suggestion
the national budget
national budgets
However
, a Linking Words
centain
level of payment needs to be set up to ensure people continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
continued
continual
banlance
their a state of equilibrium
balance
work
and live effectively.Use synonyms
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