More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

It is crystal clear that, many of the dangerous animals are about going extinct, while others are being threatened out of existence.
This
essay would discuss threats, fear and poor government policies as causes, and suggest how good orientation with better
governments
Suggestion
government
governments'
policies as solutions to
this
unfortunate trend. Some of the wild animals like dragons, dinosaur, lions and tigers to mention but a few are about going extinct.
This
is because, humans see them only as enemies and
threat
Suggestion
a threat
threats
, forgetting other sides of being useful in one way or the other.
This
made them resort to killing them, even without provocation.
For example
, lions have killed up to 500 people in the Asians in the
last
5 years.
Also
,
governments
Suggestion
the governments
of many nations have no clues of how these creatures could be useful to
human race
Suggestion
the human race
. So, they have no laws preserving them.
For example
, reports from
zoology department
Suggestion
the zoology department
of Obafemi Awolowo University revealed in 2001 that these wild animals have gone extinct in the southwest Nigeria. There
are
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are, however
however
, some possible ways out
this
ugly development.
First
of all, people should be well informed that these
animals though
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animals, though
dangerous, but needed to be preserved and not see them as sources of food all the time.
Furthermore
, government should promulgate a law to have a zoological garden where these risky beasts are kept for both research and income purposes from Tourists.
For example
, in some Asian countries, they have Zoos that people travel from far and near to see these threatened-creatures. In summary, while these wild animals have reduced in number, others are
been
the state or fact of existing
being
threatened.
This
is caused by
dangers
Suggestion
the dangers
they pose to the populace and government's poor actions or reservations,
however
, adequate having good reserve for them and governments will will curb the menace.
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