Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Plastic is one of those elements produced by

mankind which

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mankind, which

is causing serious damage to

environment

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the environment

. Especially shopping bags are the ones which are polluting

air

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the air

and water rigorously. The debate on

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topic is hot now-a-days as some believe that it should be banned while others are so habitual of using plastic, that they support for it. I agree with the decision to ban the use of it and there are multiple reasons to support it. Plastic take a huge amount of time to decompose within the range of 10 to 1000 years.

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is a big time leap and the speed by which it is produced daily, it will take no less than 50000 years to decompose if we stop manufacturing it today immediately. The main reason of stopping it is because when we burn it, it emits various

poisionous

having the qualities or effects of a poison

poisonous

gases which are not just impacting the atmosphere but

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damaging Ozone layer. Not just the air but

land

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the land

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not safe from it. Burning of it destroys the soil's fertility of that entire place. It is involved in our day-to-day life so much that we use it in almost everything in

entire day

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an entire day

the entire day

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example if

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example, if

we buy a phone from a shop we get shopping bag along with it.

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Similarly if

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Similarly, if

we visit stores to buy groceries

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we get another bag made of plastic to carry it even if we buy coffee to

drink we

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drink, we

get it in a plastic cup which we can carry anywhere. All these bags

ends

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end

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the sea and damage the marine habitats. In my opinion, the production and usage should be banned and stopped immediately and alternative should be used as soon as possible to preserve and restore

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planet.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

293 words

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detrimental
non-biodegradable
pollution
biodegradable
sustainable
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reusable
environmental impact
eco-friendly
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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?

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task 2 Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

some people say that the only reason for learninng a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss both views and give your own opinion.