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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits or disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Tourism brings pleasure along with knowledge of multiple cultures, increasing the communication skills with varied mind sets of individuals and adding some relations wherever necessary. Some journeys lave a positive
foot print
a mark of a foot or shoe on a surface
footprint
 while, some are bitter teaching a lot, leaving a
messagein
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message in
 our hearts. Pilgrimages always give us
positive experience
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a positive experience
. In
the modern
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the Modern
 World, travel has become a passion due to
ehich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
, many people prefer to go to places like
Sahara
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the Sahara
 or Antarctic areas. Surprisingly, many books are written on
such
 tours highlighting the famous places of visit, advantages and disadvantages, the traditions, customs, beliefs, food habits of the local residents. Comparatively, the atmosphere in the desert areas is completely different with regular places. It is hot and very hard to live with, including the accomodation for new people. Earlier the movement was very less as there were very rare supplies of compulsory necessities like water, shelter, clothing, etc. There
occured
come to pass
occurred
 a drastic change in the economic growth which has brought up the visitors more in number,
besides
, increase in business
opportinities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
. Now
,
Accept space
,
these places have become one of the best places for shopping, entertainment and infotainment. Many companies
emerged
formed or united into a whole
merged
 into, with
establishment
Suggestion
the establishment
 of their branch offices, creating ample educational and job opportunities which
is
Suggestion
are
 a symbol of enhancement.
Also
, there is
culture exchange
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a cultural exchange
cultural exchange
 with new sets of costumes becoming prevalent, food recipes brought into light, transport facilities in
abundant
Suggestion
abundance
 and many more. At
last
, these
place
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places
 are
also
 recognised and considered as one of the best place of tourism by every one.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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