In recent years, children have been given more freedom than in the past. Do you think this is a positive and negative development?

In the past, youngsters used to follow their

parent

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parents

wherever they go and does everything their parents order them to.

However

, there are few research studies shows evidences that proof that children should be given the opportunity to do things freely and not to be cornered by their parents as

this

will

further

stimulates

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stimulate

their mind.

Although

, there might be some drawbacks to

this

notion,

however

, I believe that the pros will outweigh the cons and will be discussed in

this

essay. Allowing the children to feel some sense of freedom will definitely help them to express themselves better.

First

of all, they are able to do activities of their interest independently,

thus

becoming more independent and increase their level of confidence. In

this

way, they will learn to be more responsible with their actions and in turn, helps them to become a mature person.

For example

, even if a child makes a mistake during solving a problem, allowing them to find the solution by themselves will

stimulates

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stimulate

their mind even if it takes time.

Nevertheless

, helicopter parents who does everything for the child causing the child to lose

trust

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the trust

of themselves that they are capable of doing something.

Therefore

, they tend to shy away when there are hurdles or challenges that they have to face as they grew older.

Moreover

, creative thinking and imagination will be at loss as these parents never give them the chance for them to do it alone.

On the other hand

, there are

few setbacks

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a few setbacks

to

this

freedom type method of parenting. Without proper parents supervision, some

children especially

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children, especially

teenagers tend to do activities that can be risky and even detrimental

for

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to

the society. For

instances

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instance

, those involved in

vandalism

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the vandalism

and drug abuse are usually teenagers that have too much space from their parents. What is even worse, some parents are not aware of the adolescent’s doing.

Therefore

, strict discipline and feasible boundaries need to be set in order the young from

roam

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roaming

around relentlessly. In conclusion, in my view, I advocate that having the youngsters to be free to do things will help cultivating their creative thinking, though boundaries need to be applied by their parent to avoid them to mingle with the wrong side of the society.