People buy electric device more than before. Is this a positive or negative development?

In the past few decades, more and more of people

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to purchase electric and electronic gadgets and equipment for their daily routine. Even though, these devices had certainly made a person’s life easier and quickly, there are few consequences that they have to face.

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, in my opinion, the dependence on these gadgets has had a huge negative impact towards the society and the

environment

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of all,

people especially

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people, especially

younger children are socially dependent on these electronic devices. These children rarely go as they prefer to stay

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within a building

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playing video games and surfing the social media to chat with their friends. Eventually,

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will lead to isolation and depression issue among teenagers. As an example, when teenagers encounter in

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a dire situation

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, they do not have actual friends

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out and help them as they only have virtual friends.

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, obesity issue is becoming a common issue among adults and children because they are becoming too lazy and comfortable in their sedentary lifestyle. For

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instance

, cleaning the house and preparing for

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a meal

has become a thing of the past, as there are portable vacuum cleaners that cleans the house and

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ready made

food that can instant cook within 5 minutes.

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, over usage of electrical devices

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affects the natural

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as well. As more humans using

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equipment, they consume more electrical energy,

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resulting diminishing amount of natural resources

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as coal and petroleum.

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, household devices

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as air conditioner leads to environmental hazards

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as thinning of the ozone layer of the Earth as it produces CFC chemical that destroys the ozone layer.

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, people are still obsessed

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using these gadgets without realizing the impact to the

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. In conclusion, the existence of these devices is useful to mankind,

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, over usage of it can lead to serious effect to the society and the

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in the future.

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, a feasible solution needed to come up to solve it.