Most of the museum and historical sites are visited by tourist and not the local people. Why is the case? How can it be solved?

Many locals becoming less interested in visiting places
such
as local
museum
and heritage
site
in these past few years. Despite of that, foreigners
finds
Suggestion
find
our local
museum
amusing to
visit
every time they
visit
our country. There
few reasons
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a few reasons
why local people are not interested to
visit
and
there
of them or themselves
their
two feasible solutions towards
this
issue.
First
of all, the historical sites lack the attractions and very outdated and due to
this
, people are bored and less of them goes
to
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with
it. Since they already have learnt the country’s history from schools and books, they tend to overlook the uniqueness of the history of the
site
might have, that they are not aware of it.
Besides
that, the attraction
to
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of
the
site
is less appealing and old as no one preserve the
site
property.
As a result
, these sites will be left out and demolished by the contractor that may plan to build new buildings.
Therefore
, it is crucial to find a solution to resolve these situations.
Firstly
, governments and
museum
directors should
corporate
work together on a common enterprise of project
cooperate
co-operate
by giving historical
site
and
museum
a fresh look to attract the local to
visit
.
Besides
that, the staff should place some effort in advertising the museums and what it has to offer.
Secondly
, the price of the entry should be cheaper or give discounts during the weekends to make them come to the place more often. In conclusion, by renewing the looks
museum
and with the collaboration of the government, more people will
visit
these place
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this place
these places
.
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