In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In quite a number of countries in the world, not so many youths read newsletters or follow

television broadcast

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television broadcasts

of recent events.

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epidemic in our society has eaten deep into our societies.

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essay will point out the causes and recommend possible solutions to

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current 'disease'.

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, within the past two decades, there has an exponential increase in social activities in our societies. These activities are of great distraction to youths and they prefer discussing or spending more time in these activities rather than read newsletters or watch the broadcast on televisions. These social activities includes, Sports television programs and

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watching music videos.

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, youths prefer watching and reading a romantic story rather than newsletters because they find it appealing and interesting.

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, youths have lost confidence in

reporters

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the reporters

. The rise

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fake and bias information

been

the state or fact of existing

being

reported daily in the news has led to reduce interest in reading or watching the news by youths. And

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, reporters don't support youth programs, so a lot of them feel that there is nothing

about them been said

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being said about them

about them being said

on the news

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, no need to listen or read whatever they have to say.

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, there are better ways to solve these problems. Government should reduce the number of uneducated television programs

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, high school teachers should make reading of the national dailies compulsory.

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, there should be a weekly revision class on

newspaper review

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a newspaper review

by students.

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, News agencies should improve in their content, support youth programs

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and, also

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, publish a lot of articles written by youths.

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, rewards and awards should be published

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the national and local dailies and

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broadcast on televisions. In conclusion, Social activities and lack of inclusive reporting are the major

problems why

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problems, why

youths are losing interest in reading and listening to news reports.

Serhii Baraniuk

May 6, 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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305 words

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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