Task 2 In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In quite a number of countries in the world, not so many youths read newsletters or follow
television broadcast
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television broadcasts
of recent events.
This
epidemic in our society has eaten deep into our societies.
This
essay will point out the causes and recommend possible solutions to
this
current 'disease'.
To begin
, within the past two decades, there has an exponential increase in social activities in our societies. These activities are of great distraction to youths and they prefer discussing or spending more time in these activities rather than read newsletters or watch the broadcast on televisions. These social activities includes, Sports television programs and
also
watching music videos.
For example
, youths prefer watching and reading a romantic story rather than newsletters because they find it appealing and interesting.
Furthermore
, youths have lost confidence in
reporters
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the reporters
. The rise
in
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of
fake and bias information
been
the state or fact of existing
being
reported daily in the news has led to reduce interest in reading or watching the news by youths. And
also
, reporters don't support youth programs, so a lot of them feel that there is nothing
about them been said
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being said about them
about them being said
on the news
thus
, no need to listen or read whatever they have to say.
However
, there are better ways to solve these problems. Government should reduce the number of uneducated television programs
also
, high school teachers should make reading of the national dailies compulsory.
For instance
, there should be a weekly revision class on
newspaper review
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a newspaper review
by students.
Furthermore
, News agencies should improve in their content, support youth programs
and
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and, also
also
, publish a lot of articles written by youths.
For example
, rewards and awards should be published
on
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in
the national and local dailies and
also
broadcast on televisions. In conclusion, Social activities and lack of inclusive reporting are the major
problems why
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problems, why
youths are losing interest in reading and listening to news reports.
Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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