Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

#salary #job #satisfaction

It is true that we earn for

living but

Suggestion

a living, but

a living but

at the same time, job without satisfaction is obsolete. An income will satisfy the needs or wants of

one-self

reflexive form of "one"

oneself

, family,

occassions

something you have to do

occasions

, friends, outings and many more

instead

. Career growth is

also

equally important which can be achieved only after having a satisfactory profile.

For instance

, many

multi national

involving or operating in several nations or nationalities

multinational

companies (MNC), now-a-days, recruit staff with high wages along with high expectations.

Initially

every thing

all things

everything

is good when it is new for that person; Salary

wise he

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wise, he

/she is very joyous while, slowly the dislike towards the work starts due to various reasons like shift hours, pressure, roles, responsibilities, team mates, boss

Accept space

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

,. In

such

cases one

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cases, one

has to take it up as a challenge to meet the expectations, in order to motivate themselves with utmost patience. Many a times,

this

might lead to dissatisfaction towards the job resulting in frustration. Ultimately, a psychological disturbance occurs in the individual, paving way to numerous problems viz., sudden loss of memory power, nervousness, fear, grief, agony, screaming, etc.

This obviously

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This, obviously

, causes major physical damage creating health problems like spine issues, headaches, brain related sickness,

difference

Suggestion

differences

a difference

in blood flow,

likewise

Also

, it can end with long lasting diseases too on the higher side. Keeping in view all the aforesaid points, it is always better to have

satisfactory job

Suggestion

a satisfactory job

by the end of the day making

one self

reflexive form of "one"

oneself

feel at ease and happiness, rather than focusing on money.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

remuneration
financial security
motivation
luxuries
material possessions
fulfillment
work-life balance
stress levels
mental well-being
job security

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

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