Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty. Therefore,developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Even though technology is developing at a fast pace and the standard of living of most individuals has gone up
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billions of people still live in poverty
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and in many places
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the rich countries give financial
aid
to developing and underdeveloped countries. I completely agree that developed countries should render other types of
aid
to the poor countries and not direct financial
aid
. There are numerous reasons why affluent nations should not assist poverty stricken countries financially.
Firstly
, financial
aid
may not actually reach those for whom it is meant for.
it
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It
may go into corrupt pockets.
Secondly
, it would make those people lazy as they would be getting help without doing any work.
Thirdly
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the
aid
may be used for wrong purposes.
For example
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aid
may be given for development
projects but
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projects, but
it may
used
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use
to promote terrorism.
Therefore
, well-to-do countries should assist poorer countries in other ways rather than financial help. The effective method to assist underdeveloped countries should be to open good education institutes
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good health centres and creating job opportunities for
people
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the people
of the poor countries.
Education program
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The education program
will impact knowledge to the
populace thereby
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populace, thereby
enhancing productivity.
In addition
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good hospitals will reduce mortality and morbidity rate in the country.To illustrate
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a recent survey carried out
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in
Libya by
department
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the department
of Health and Environment resources revealed that the death rate of the people reduced from 75% to 20% due to a huge
hospitals
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hospital
built by
American president
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an American president
in 2017.
Hence
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education and infrastructures will no longer improve the
individual but
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individual, but
a whole nation. In conclusion, financial help is not the best way to assist poor countries
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In my opinion, I completely agree that developed countries ought to assist impoverished countries through other approaches.
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