Every country should have a free health service even if this means the latest medical treatment may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the world today, the importance of
care services cannot be
overemphasized which
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overemphasized, which
is why it should be made available at no cost to the citizens.
, I do no believe that
should be at the expense of quality medical advancements.
, the outcome of any medical service provided is very important and
has been improved to a great extent by modern medical development. Now, making diagnosis and treatment is easier and less invasive.
For example
, using a
machine to perform surgery has reduced the risk of surgical site infections and surgical scars.
, providing completely free
services creates a financial burden on the government. Funds from other important sectors like education and provision of social amenities would be diverted
system. When
difficult it
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difficult, it
could lead to a collapse in
health system
the health system
is why the government has designed a
insurance policy which has made
care both affordable and sustainable.
On the other hand
, more people would benefit from medical management when it is free. Citizens that are financially handicapped would be able to afford quality
care which would in turn improve the overall
status. In conclusion, delivering
services to members of the society at no cost is
important but
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important, but
should not replace quality and modern medicine which helps in making accurate diagnosis, prompt treatment and improved outcome.
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