Question 3 Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Electronic gadgets are becoming an important aspect of
school
lesson. While the advantages of
this
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supersede
, it
also
has its demerits.
This
essay will discuss distraction and addiction to computer as its main disadvantage and technological approach to learning as its primary advantage. The introduction of electronic learning in schools
have raised
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has raised
concerns regarding distractions where a lot of the children's attention is
turn
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turned
away from the primary purpose of learning into other facilities in the computer.
For instance
,
Karim international
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the Karim international school
school
recently disapproved the
use
if computers during
school
hours.
Additionally
, the
use
of electronic gadget
have been revealed
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has been revealed
to cause addiction to
school
children which
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children, which
in turn undermines the human ability and interferes with logical reasoning. Research conducted by
National mathematical centre
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the National mathematical centre
revealed that 57% of
school
rely on computers for arithmetic addition. Despite arguments about the drawbacks of the
use
if
computers for
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computers, for
school
work, it is believed to improve the technical know-how of children leading to building of smarter kids. National association of paediatric doctors carried out a study which showed that 60% of children exposed to electronic gadgets appeared smarter than others. In conclusion, distractions and addiction are considered the demerits of computer usage in
school
but with cautious
use
, the
technological
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technologically
advantage of its usage is more beneficial.

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