In many cities, young people prefer shopping as a form of leisure activity, why do you think this happens and is it a positive or negative development?
In the era of urbanization, shopping complexes can easily be seen at everywhere. As the standard of living increases, a majority of adolescents spend more
time
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at
there more often, as it is a part of Suggestion
in
on
relaxation moment
for them these days. Suggestion
a relaxation moment
However
, in my opinion, I believe that Linking Words
this
can Linking Words
brings
a negative impact to the young generation.
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bring
First
of all, Linking Words
shopping complex
is where most people go to shop necessary item and goods for the necessity needs and at the same Suggestion
the shopping complex
time
, there is some shop where they can enjoy themselves Use synonyms
such
as café, game arcade and movie Linking Words
theater
. For a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
this
reason, the children tend to enjoy spending their leisure Linking Words
time
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at
there rather than in the outdoors. Despites of that, the teenagers use their parent’s money to enjoy themselves as going to these places requires extra cash to pay for the expenditures. Suggestion
in
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
leads to overspending their money on things that are unnecessary to them. Eventually, they will be more obsessed Linking Words
in
spending more money just to have a good Suggestion
with
time
. Use synonyms
For example
, there are reports stated teenagers in Malaysia spend about RM 100 per month just by going to the Linking Words
theater
as they go every a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
time
a new movie is released.
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Besides
that, frequently going to the shopping mall can Linking Words
jeopardized
their academic results as they spend less Suggestion
jeopardize
time
at home doing their revision. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, lack of supervision of their parent can lead to bad Linking Words
behavior
and began to rebel against their parents and the society. manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
For instance
, a study showed that students that spends Linking Words
time
in the super mall tends to skip classes from school more often and having lower academic result in the examination. Use synonyms
Moreover
, students are spending more Linking Words
time
in shopping complexes are Use synonyms
likely to involve in
crimes Suggestion
likely to involve
such
as snatch theft and burglary as they desperately need more cash to waste on Linking Words
item
and services in the super mall.
In conclusion, it is clearly a negative impact towards the development of the future generation to spend their valuable Suggestion
an item
items
time
on mere shopping. Use synonyms
Therefore
, parents are urged to keep an eye Linking Words
in
their children’s activities and only allow them when they are mature enough to make Suggestion
on
reasonable decision
.
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reasonable decisions
a reasonable decision
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