University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of thier studies.do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

Many university students move to
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
countries for
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
education which has become a common trend.
Although
pupils
face
struggles like linguistic challenges and change in
cultures but
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cultures, but
despite these hurdles they can gain practical knowledge and self
experience
.
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In my opinion
,
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,
it is better for them to
studying
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study
overseas despite some problems that they have to
face
. The main advantages of studying out of
thier
of them or themselves
their
own country is students may grasp more practical knowledge and personal
experience
.
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.
Firstly
,
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,
they can perform realistic practices with the help of advance tech system and more well developed ideas
.
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For
example in
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example, in
Canada there are
lot
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lots
of students come every year for study purposes because of more practical exposures and high technology.
Secondly they
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Secondly, they
improve themselves by facing several issues while in abroad which give them a life
experience
for example
,
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,
in countries like Canada and
Australia where
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Australia, where
students come from several nations with different nationalities where they
continously
seemingly without interruption
continually
continuously
pushed out of
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
comfort zone into
psychological states
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the psychological states
that they have to adopt no matter what
.
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.
The practical training and
challanging
requiring full use of your abilities or resources
challenging
experiences are the great advantages of studying abroad because they make them grow as a person.
Conversly
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Conversely
,
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,
the main troubles that students
face
are language barrier and
traditional difference
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traditional differences
the traditional difference
.
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.
These differences may act like a
stones
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stone
in
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
paths of life because they have to communicate with others and accept the culture of that country which is a totally unknown for them.For
intance
an occurrence of something
instance
,
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,
my friend moved to
indonesia
a republic in southeastern Asia on an archipelago including more than 13,000 islands; achieved independence from the Netherlands in 1945; the principal oil producer in the Far East and Pacific regions
Indonesia
and she had to
face
problem
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a problem
problems
while communicating with local people in
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
language which is out of her culture
.
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.
These circumstances make students helpless
.
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Studying overseas has become incredibly common while students
face
social and language
problems but
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problems, but
they attain a personal
experience
with functional performances
that is
more advantageous than disadvantageous.

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