Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common What do you think are causes of it? What solutions can you suggest ?

Sicknesses are
bieng
the state or fact of existing
being
been
suffered by people as a
redult
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
result
of
stress
.
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.
This
essay
will discuss the main causes of
stress
related sicknesses including longer working hours and increased job pressure.Some solutions will
also
be suggested in
this
essay including
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essay, including
improving one's
work
life
and
diet
. People are working longer hours than ever before
.
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.
In addition
, they have more job pressure
.
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.
people
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People
place themselves under these unfavourable conditions because the workforce is a competitive domain.
For example
,
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,
some people aspire to climb the
cooperate
of or belonging to a corporation
corporate
ladder to gain high status and high paying jobs
.
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.
This
often results in mental and physical suffering because they have to
work
overtime and take on additional roles which can be
stressfull
extremely irritating to the nerves
stressful
. Maintaining a good
work
life
balance and improving one's
diet
are
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is
both critical to mitigating
stress
related illnesses.
people
Suggestion
People
need to realise
thatvif
they live only for
work
they will suffer either mentally or physically and poor
diet
will
further
exacerbate these issues.
For example
,
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,
many employees burn out from working too much and
neglacting
leave undone or leave out
neglecting
family
,
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,
friends
,
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,
excercises
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercises
exercise
and hobbies as well as the foods they eat.
Therefore
,
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,
in order to reduce
work
one must include a better ratio of
work
,
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,
rest
,
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,
recreation and
dietry
of or relating to the diet
dietary
sustenance.
in
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In
conclusion
,
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,
in today's
life
paced world more and more people are
brcoming
according with custom or propriety
becoming
ill
as a result
of
stress
.
This
essay
discussed how
stress
is often caused by working hours and intense workplace pressure.
This
essay
also
suggested that the solutions to
this
problem are twofold to manage a better
work
life
balance and to eat healthier
diet
.
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