Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common What do you think are causes of it? What solutions can you suggest ?

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Sicknesses are

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the state or fact of existing

being

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suffered by people as a

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a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

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essay

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will discuss the main causes of

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related sicknesses including longer working hours and increased job pressure.Some solutions will

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be suggested in

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improving one's

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life

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and

diet

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. People are working longer hours than ever before

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, they have more job pressure

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people

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People

place themselves under these unfavourable conditions because the workforce is a competitive domain.

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some people aspire to climb the

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of or belonging to a corporation

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ladder to gain high status and high paying jobs

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often results in mental and physical suffering because they have to

work

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overtime and take on additional roles which can be

stressfull

extremely irritating to the nerves

stressful

. Maintaining a good

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life

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balance and improving one's

diet

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are

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both critical to mitigating

stress

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related illnesses.

people

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People

need to realise

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they live only for

work

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they will suffer either mentally or physically and poor

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will

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exacerbate these issues.

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many employees burn out from working too much and

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leave undone or leave out

neglecting

family

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friends

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excercises

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercises

exercise

and hobbies as well as the foods they eat.

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in order to reduce

work

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one must include a better ratio of

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rest

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recreation and

dietry

of or relating to the diet

dietary

sustenance.

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conclusion

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in today's

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paced world more and more people are

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according with custom or propriety

becoming

ill

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stress

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essay

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discussed how

stress

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is often caused by working hours and intense workplace pressure.

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Topic Vocabulary:

technological advancements
constant connectivity
job demands
work-related stress
societal pressure
achieve success
erosion
work-life balance
exposure
negative news
social media comparisons
chronic stress
mental health support
stigma
flexible work hours
stress management techniques
mindfulness
access to mental health services
community support systems
emotional support

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Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common What do you think are causes of it? What solutions can you suggest ?

Your opinion

Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. •In your letter: Give a brief description of the business •Mention what you’d like to be there on the website. •Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

People are working for long hours than before, this leads to a stressful life ahead. what are the reasons for it? what employers can do to handle the situation?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers. what are the reasons behind it? how can we reverse this trend? what punishment methods should be used, in your opinion?