It is predicted that robotsare going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

Human beings might come to rely more on artificial intelligence in the
. Robots can be used to perform varieties of activities ranging from menial jobs
as waiting tables to more sophisticated ones like performing medical procedures. The increasing use of robots in the
will be a negative development because of ethical issues concerning emotions and the rate of unemployment.     Advancement in
technology especially
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technology, especially
in robotics has made living more efficient and effective. Robots can replace human beings in areas
as customer service, packaging and emergency call line services. They are
excellent for jobs that require precision and accuracy. These can range from architectural designing to robotic-
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surgeries. They would eliminate sloppiness and increase response
time especially
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time, especially
in dangerous situations
as fire outbreaks and other disasters that require evacuation of people.   
, robots can be very
providing assistance or serving a useful function
to humanity, a world where we become too dependent on them can have deleterious effects.
and foremost is the fact that robots like other forms of artificial
intelligence lack
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intelligence, lack
emotions and
cannot empathize. Humans, as social animals use one form of emotion or the other
being one more than one
relate. Most of our decisions are made by what we feel is right. Can one teach emotion to a robot?
For instance
, a robot driving its owner home has to make a decision about an impending accident, does it protect its
at all cost regardless of the implications or does it choose a scenario with less casualties.  
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with the increasing population and limited resources, depending more on robots would put people out of jobs.
Most lower
and middle class families get by on menial jobs like being waiters, customer service or emergency service line operators.
could in turn lead to the crippling of economies as robots need high end maintenance and the cost of producing and servicing them can be more expensive than human
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
.  There is no doubt that robots will play an important role in our lives in the
. They can be used to perform surgeries, rescue operations as well as other skilled activities. A
with a lot of dependence on robots will be a negative development.
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