Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you

There are many advocates of the opinion that career is the most important factor to measure a meaningful
life
.
However
, in my point of view, working is just one of many major ingredients that create a
life
that is
worth to live. It cannot be denied that job is a major financial source that help us to meet various demands and even to support
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
life
.
Accept space
.
First
of all, People need food, water, house and many other material things for their basic living so that We have to
work
hard to earn at least enough for our expenditures.
Moreover
, many others are even working to raise their children or support their beloved old parents and even other extra demands for a higher standard of living like a fancy car, a spacious house, delicious food,... These are the reasons why
job
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the job
is really essential to
everyone
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everyone's
life
.
On the other hand
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that job is just a tool to ensure a
wealthy
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
life
and it is not enough for a meaningful
life
. There are many other things in our
life
that are
also
as valuable as career
such
as our
health
, our happiness and our relationship with
important ones
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the important ones
. At
first
, we
can not
can not
cannot
work
when we are ill. Employees
can not
can not
cannot
do their best if they are lack of sleep. Workers at factories can not
work
with broken legs. Not only physical
health
but mental
health
is
also
worth
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
weight in gold. Everyone
need
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needs
to take care of their mental
health
since we are human, we have
feeling
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felt
. These days, mental problem
such
as stress, depression
ect
are
huge burden
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a huge burden
to many lives and even kill many of them. Those are the reason why people should pay more attention to their happiness, arrange enough time to relax and refueled their energy after
work
, take care of their relationship, spend enough time with their beloved ones. In conclusion, successful career is just a tool to create a beautiful
life
. There are many other valuable things that should be used to measure a meaningful
life
.
Submitted by Thanh on

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