Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is
controversial issue
a controversial issue
that whether consumers are tricked by different forms of
into buying goods unreasonably or that
helps them make informed decisions to buy what they want. To some extent I agree that advertising has an impact on sales, but I would
agree that we do need most of the goods that we buy. On the one hand, there are people who argue that
agencies nowadays have become extremely clever in convincing people to buy certain products. The reason for
belief is that many people are making purchases that simply do not reflect any of their personal needs because they just want to stay
up date
with the latest fashions.
For instance
, every year people can be seen queuing to buy the latest models of mobile phone, even when they already have a perfectly good phone that does not need replacing.
, advertisements encourage
the sale
of inferior products so people are tempted by handsome prices without concerning about real quality as well as their demand.
On the other hand
, it is often argued that the benefits of
considerably outweigh its disadvantages.
, there are a lot of new useful products coming out every day and the only way to know more information about them is through advertisements.
, if the customers have demand for
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
items, they will take some advertisements into account. One interesting illustration of
is the promotion of new medications which help doctors prescribe and educate patients about the benefits of these medications.
In addition
, new products almost always have improved features that buyers may want so they need to be advertised for the best sales. A new car,
for example
, may have greatly improved safety features, more economic to run or it may pollute less. In conclusion, while advertising obviously influences our buying
manner of acting or controlling yourself
, I do not agree that people make decisions that against their real needs.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation


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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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