You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
letter suits you well. I'm contacting
today
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in regards to the interview
oragnised
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for myself on
the
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Tuesday 16th of May at midday, for my business and management course
next
year. My sincere sincere apologies for any
inconvinience
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but I won't be able to make it at midday, I have another appointment at 11.30am the same day at Cambridge school.
However
, Cambridge school is not far from yours and I will be available to come later on
this
day to meet you in person and discuss
about
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your business class training. Could you please let me know approximately how long the interview will
last
?
Furthermore
, is there are any tests during it? I like to organise myself.
I'm look
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forward to hearing from you very soon.
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Your
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sincerely, Quentin Launay
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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