Some people believe that student in school learn better when they studying in group, whereas other believe better when they study their own. Discuss both view and give your opinion

Whilst,
majority
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the majority
of people assume that people in school studying superior studying in
group
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the group
a group
groups
,
however others
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however, others
think that
student
learn better when they
study
alone. I will discuss both views in the following paragraphs. To embark with, there are myriad reasons why I am claiming that
student
can learn in
better way
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a better way
when they are studying individually.
Moreover
, learning independently can help acquire more knowledge. As compared to those who want to
study
in
group
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a group
groups
.
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.
Furthermore
, if
student
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a student study
the student study
study
his / her self
then
they concentrate on their
study
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studies
. It would be excellent for
study
.
Additionally
, they can
also
start learning without waiting anyone. Which can allow more spare time for
study
. Contrary above to the statement, it is undeniable that by studying together
student
can have
better understanding
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a better understanding
what they are learning.
In addition
, everyone has
different thinking perspective
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a different thinking perspective
about the knowledge instructed by teachers.
Thus
, learner can absorb it in various ways when they choose group
study
.
Also
, studying with other can help pupils learn efficiently
,
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,
they are encouraged to complete their task when they see others are studying. To be specific, students
do not have finished
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haven't finished
have not finished
don't finish
do not finish
reading all the chapters of a book which is provided by professors
instead
of they prefer to discuss
topic
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topics
the topic
a topic
with other peers. Which is more convenient rather than read books.
which
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Which
is more convenient rather than read books. In the conclusion, there is no doubt both are
appropriate
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appropriate, however
however
every person have different ability of learning. Students
should studying according
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should study, according
should study according
their own way which would be better for learning.
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