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Some people believe that student in school learn better when they studying in group, whereas other believe better when they study their own. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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Whilst,
majority
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the majority
 of people assume that people in school studying superior studying in
group
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the group
a group
groups
,
however others
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however, others
 think that
student
 learn better when they
study
 alone. I will discuss both views in the following paragraphs. To embark with, there are myriad reasons why I am claiming that
student
 can learn in
better way
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a better way
 when they are studying individually.
Moreover
, learning independently can help acquire more knowledge. As compared to those who want to
study
 in
group
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a group
groups
.
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.
Furthermore
, if
student
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a student study
the student study
study
 his / her self
then
 they concentrate on their
study
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studies
. It would be excellent for
study
.
Additionally
, they can
also
 start learning without waiting anyone. Which can allow more spare time for
study
. Contrary above to the statement, it is undeniable that by studying together
student
 can have
better understanding
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a better understanding
 what they are learning.
In addition
, everyone has
different thinking perspective
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a different thinking perspective
 about the knowledge instructed by teachers.
Thus
, learner can absorb it in various ways when they choose group
study
.
Also
, studying with other can help pupils learn efficiently
,
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,
they are encouraged to complete their task when they see others are studying. To be specific, students
do not have finished
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haven't finished
have not finished
don't finish
do not finish
 reading all the chapters of a book which is provided by professors
instead
 of they prefer to discuss
topic
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topics
the topic
a topic
 with other peers. Which is more convenient rather than read books.
which
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Which
 is more convenient rather than read books. In the conclusion, there is no doubt both are
appropriate
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appropriate, however
however
 every person have different ability of learning. Students
should studying according
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should study, according
should study according
 their own way which would be better for learning.
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