A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The qualities in olden times, which
defined
the worth of a Suggestion
defining
person
, have fallen in importance and previously unimportant factors have gained priority. Qualities Use synonyms
such
as kindness, Linking Words
honor
and trust are no longer the defining factors of worth and social bestow honor or rewards upon
honour
status
has gained primary importance. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss Linking Words
this
statement and Linking Words
it's
accuracy.
With the expansion of equality and poverty campaigns, people have become hyper aware about the social of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
status
of others. Use synonyms
This
means that when an individual comes into contact with a Linking Words
person
of differing social Use synonyms
status
- his behaviour toward the Use synonyms
person
often corresponds to the Use synonyms
person
's socioeconomic Use synonyms
status
. Use synonyms
For instance
, the behaviour of an Linking Words
indiviual
towards a construction worker varies from that towards a wealthy a human being
individual
business man
.
a person engaged in commercial or industrial business (especially an owner or executive)
businessman
Although
, Linking Words
this
behaviour can be either negative or positive, the core theme remains constant which is judgement. Linking Words
For example
, the certain- perhaps unfair- expectations placed on the wealthy to be generous and Linking Words
likewise
, accusations if donations are thought to be insignificant. People are judged based on their wealth and disrespected if the wealthy do not donate whilst people with a lower socioeconomic Linking Words
status
are not burdened with the same expectations.
Use synonyms
Similarly
, people of a lower socioeconomic Linking Words
status
may be disregarded or treated with indifference due to their lack of monetary prosperity. Use synonyms
For example
, some restaurants may disregard Linking Words
people
of lower wealth and provide them with a low quality service- Suggestion
the people
soley
based on their apparent social without any others being included or involved
solely
status
.
Due to various campaigns, social Use synonyms
status
has been unintentionally ingrained in society- the mission to eradicate discrimination based on social Use synonyms
status
has unintentionally highlighted social Use synonyms
status
in society. As Use synonyms
such
campaigns were rare in olden times, social prosperity was an observation- not an aspect to be mindful of. Due to Linking Words
this
, worth was defined by other factors Linking Words
such
as kindness, trust and courage. Linking Words
Although
, social Linking Words
status
discrimination did exist, other factors took priority over Use synonyms
this
discrimination in defining the worth of a Linking Words
person
. Use synonyms
For instance
, in a room full of people- courage, skill and justice declared the worth of a Linking Words
person
rather than their economic background.
To conclude, I agree to a great extent that the worth of a Use synonyms
person
is now decided based on social Use synonyms
status
due to hyper awareness caused by campaigns, etc. Use synonyms
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