Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Public libraries are undoubtedly a treasure of reliable source of information.
Although
, many people are totally against the existence of libraries and believe it is of no use. Whereas
,
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,
other feel it is important to have them
for
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in
public.I agree with the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
assertion and
this
essay will discuss both viewpoints and will try to justify my opinion using some relevant real world examples. Taking
first statement
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the first statement
into consideration,
this
internet world does not reflect the necessity of public libraries. Where every piece of information is just one click away, physical books are not required. A tangible example of a pupil surfing internet on his laptop at his home to get some
knowledge
do not want to visit library for
same
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the same
can prove the unimportance of public libraries.
Also
, it is said that the content at libraries is outdated. Due to which people do not prefer to go to that source of information,
instead
, they emphasize to e-libraries. These issues prove why people do not want public libraries.
On the other hand
, libraries do play an integral role to provide
knowledge
of numerous type of content which is still not available online. Dissertations and research material of previous local scientist are two of them.
Also
, as most public libraries and free of cost and does not charge anything from visitors, so it is very convenient and affordable for all people either from slum or from
underprivileged area
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the underprivileged area
underprivileged areas
. These factors clearly define the notability of public libraries.
Furthermore
, libraries clearly define the traditional method of learning and getting
knowledge
. Needless to say, it is foolish to eliminate culture and follow modern approaches. Talking about my personal opinion
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe
,
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,
however
technology truly blessed us with numerous mediums of getting
knowledge
,
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,
but
unfollowing
open libraries is not advisable
.
Accept space
.
Nevertheless
,
libraries these
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libraries, these
days do have both physical and e-books as well as
cds
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CDs
cards
and
visuals
imagine; conceive of; see in one's mind
visualize
visualise
visual
data is
also
increasing in libraries
,
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,
so it is very beneficial to keep them.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

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