During the last century, the use of cars has increased dramatically. This has caused problems such as pollution and overcrowded roads. Why do people buy cars and what can we do to stop people from buying them?

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Right from the century of Cavemen to recent 15th century B.C.

people

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People

hardly know about travel on vehicles, so as to go to any place, they had to go either on foot or small vehicles like bullock carts, rickshaws, chariots and

like wise

in like or similar manner

likewise

which had now become scarce.

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, two wheelers like bicycles,

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scooters, bikes, after which emerged three wheelers like rickshaws and auto rickshaws, there,

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four wheelers namely cars. Use of cars

have become

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has become

very

predominent

having a quality that thrusts itself into attention

prominent

predominant

now-a-days, that too has become significant usage with multiple reasons in

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fast growing society. The intellect behind using

cars abundantly

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cars, abundantly

is a minimum requirement in the existing World,

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, they feel it is the status proofing remark in between their loved ones. Though

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is the fact, but none is aware of the problems that has

to being faced

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faced

because of these heavy road vehicles. Dramatic inclination in cost of living is

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one of the reasons for

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drastic changes,

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, There are majorly four problems faced cause of

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type of transport

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, particularly such as

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as air pollution, noise pollution, traffic jams and road accidents. As much as the increase in number occurs, much is the contamination

scatter

someone who skates

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takes place, paving way to health issues, there

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

. Issues like respiratory problems, indigestion, nausea, lung related troubles and many more

mess

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messes

happens. Even doctors suggest not to use wagons as they are diluted, creating numerous unhealthy dilemma, despite use an open two wheeler which costs lesser than the maintenance of the car. Awareness programs should be conducted

inorder

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in order

to educate an individual in

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perspective, by the government showing a reduction and a reasonable utilization of

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means. Concisely, one has to be mature enough on how to use so and so goods, keeping in view the repercussions and challenges that has to be met; so that few actions can develop

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adverse stages.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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