During the last century, the use of cars has increased dramatically. This has caused problems such as pollution and overcrowded roads. Why do people buy cars and what can we do to stop people from buying them?

Right from the century of Cavemen to recent 15th century B.C.
people
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People
hardly know about travel on vehicles, so as to go to any place, they had to go either on foot or small vehicles like bullock carts, rickshaws, chariots and
like wise
in like or similar manner
likewise
which had now become scarce.
Initially
, two wheelers like bicycles,
then
scooters, bikes, after which emerged three wheelers like rickshaws and auto rickshaws, there,
finally
four wheelers namely cars. Use of cars
have become
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has become
very
predominent
having a quality that thrusts itself into attention
prominent
predominant
now-a-days, that too has become significant usage with multiple reasons in
this
fast growing society. The intellect behind using
cars abundantly
Accept comma addition
cars, abundantly
is a minimum requirement in the existing World,
also
, they feel it is the status proofing remark in between their loved ones. Though
this
is the fact, but none is aware of the problems that has
to being faced
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faced
because of these heavy road vehicles. Dramatic inclination in cost of living is
also
one of the reasons for
such
drastic changes,
moreover
, There are majorly four problems faced cause of
this
type of transport
particularly,
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, particularly such as
such
as air pollution, noise pollution, traffic jams and road accidents. As much as the increase in number occurs, much is the contamination
scatter
someone who skates
skater
takes place, paving way to health issues, there
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
. Issues like respiratory problems, indigestion, nausea, lung related troubles and many more
mess
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messes
happens. Even doctors suggest not to use wagons as they are diluted, creating numerous unhealthy dilemma, despite use an open two wheeler which costs lesser than the maintenance of the car. Awareness programs should be conducted
inorder
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in order
to educate an individual in
this
perspective, by the government showing a reduction and a reasonable utilization of
such
means. Concisely, one has to be mature enough on how to use so and so goods, keeping in view the repercussions and challenges that has to be met; so that few actions can develop
such
adverse stages.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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