Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons why people do this? Do you think it is a good thing or a bad thing?

  The topic of anti-aging is becoming increasingly popular. The major reasons why people want to look younger are increased self esteem and the significant amount of negative societal pressure on bodily perfection. In my opinion, it is very good for people to try to appear younger than their ages because it helps increase effectiveness and efficiency, as well as improved health.        With the advent of social media and technological advancement, it has become
ubiquitious
being present everywhere at once
ubiquitous
for most people to want to look younger and feel beautiful. Human beings have existed for centuries, but are yet to comfortably accept the body's aging process. We tend to boost our self confidence if our outward appearance is spectacular. The society frowns upon aging and
portays
portray in words
portrays
it as a pathology. People who look older are seen as unattractive and are most often than not segregated and bullied. From personal experience, I attended a school reunion, during which I was chastised by my fellow colleagues for looking five years older. I was gloomy most of the time
,
Accept space
,
however
, I proceeded to work on my skin care routine. After weeks of vigorous skin therapy, I started receiving compliments and I have felt really good about myself ever since.        Everywhere in the world today, there are adverts of
skin anti
Accept comma addition
skin, anti
-aging creams, methods and regimens. Fashion lines exhibit clothings and fabrics that make people look younger and
vibrant
Suggestion
more vibrant
. Personally, I believe
this
is a welcome development. Human beings should be able to enjoy the world without a fixation on aging. People see older looking individuals as weak and dependent, but really its an evidence of maturity and a good force of nature.
Nevertheless
, in a society where looking younger
is
Suggestion
has been
already the norm, it should be embraced. When people feel better about themselves, productivity increases significantly. Experts have shown that the feeling of looking a year younger than one's actual age has tremendous health benefits ranging from reduced blood pressure to engaging in healthier lifestyles and improved mood.         In conclusion, the art of looking younger is increasingly popular.
Majority
Suggestion
The majority
of the people tend to try to look younger because of the way society portrays bodily perfection, as well as to boost self esteem. In my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think it is a good thing because it results in an elated mood which has significant positive benefits on health.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Try other services:

All the services are free for Premium users