Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

A lot of
museums
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the museums
charge a visiting fee from their attendees while there are others that have a free entrance.
This
essay will argue that despite museums charging entrance fees can deter many people from visiting them, the benefit of using the revenue for art maintenance far outweigh any drawback. The main disadvantage of museums charging visitor fees is that it would discourage the public from going to
such
places. Many people are overburdened with financial obligations and believe that paying to see arts and other historic places is a waste of money.
For example
, the Louvre museum in Paris charges 50 euros
from
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for
each of its visitors to see their famous paintings, but a lot of people are unable to afford
such
high rates and take their whole family.
However
, I believe that museums do not need to charge the same rate from all individuals, and they could offer special concessions for different sections of the society,
such
as students and elderly folks,
thus
making it affordable for the public. Charging a certain fee can help museums maintain their valuable pieces of artworks. Many paintings and
artifacts
a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
require regular maintenance and museums need to employ expert professionals to take care of them.
For example
, old scriptures require
specific type
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specific types
a specific type
of experts who help to preserve them every year from wear and tear. I believe that
this
is a very important advantage because without having proper funds museums will not be able to sustain their artworks. In conclusion, charging a certain visitor
fees
Suggestion
fee
by museums for preserving their artwork far outweighs any disadvantage of public
unattendance
the act of being present (at a meeting or event etc.)
attendance
due to high fees.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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