Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Advertising is a tool to sell products in the marketplace. It helps the seller to provide information about the
to the potential buyer of the
. Many times, we do come across advertisements which are unique, and a person gets interested to use the
mainly because of the curiosity which
is developed
in an individual after viewing the publicity material of the products. There are
advertisements of products which really help to improve and make our lives comfortable. In
essay I express my views
the topic. In my opinion, advertisements do motivate individuals to buy products that are not needed.
happens mainly because the interest developed after viewing or listening to the advertising material. Many times,
curiosity is because of a feature of the
or just a different way to use a similar
. As an example, recently
refers to the speaker or writer
commercial of a pen which has
with a fragrance. While I have many pens and there was no need for me to purchase a new pen.
, I did purchase the pen just to experience the scented ink. There are many
publicity materials that you come across in daily life and people end up spending money on unnecessary products. To summarize, while advertising helps to create a propaganda about a
. It is always on the individual to maintain a rational approach and buy products. It is fine to try something new at times,
however we
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however, we
should not make it a habit to procure something
that is
not useful.
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