Traditional medicine, such as acupuncture and herbal remedies, is very popular in some countries. Those who practise traditional medicine claim it is better than modern medicine in maintaining and improving health. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

"Health is Wealth", aptly said by Swami Vivekananda, for which, an individual
rlshas
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resource
to pay utmost attention in gaining sound health. In today's World, countless number of diseases have become prevalent, resulting in usage of modern medicines like drugs, antibiotics, etc., but the same
are not recommended
Suggestion
is not recommended
as they have many side
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
. Whereas the traditional treatment given in ancient days like
acupunture
treatment of pain or disease by inserting the tips of needles at specific points on the skin
acupuncture
, herbal remedies, homeopathic medicament
are
Suggestion
is
very
encouragable
. It is a well known fact that, therapeutics provided in past days, usually took
lot
Suggestion
a lot
of time to cure the disease, on the flip side, they not only cure but
also
prevents the disease not to repeat in future. That too, those salves has no side problems or raising of other diseases like that of allopathic nature has.
For example
, when a patient suffering from severe Rheumatoid Arthritis is given a steroid named, Methotrexate, HCQs in support and Folic Acid for more energy,
besides
, they have to be given a Pantosec or PAN-D as the above
prescrption
directions prescribed beforehand; the action of prescribing authoritative rules or directions
prescription
prescriptions
, create gastric problem due to the nature of that drug. Simultaneously, there occurs
second
problem, in
additon
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
to
this
, the
third
and so on, in an increasing manner. Ultimately, there
happens no
Accept comma addition
happens, no
end for consuming latest strips. Adding to
this
, one has many food restrictions at
this
permanently, creating disharmony in the body functioning; Perhaps, even after
such
long medication, the physic may react or may not and even if reduced now, might restart once after stopping
such
healing. In contrary to
this
, is the bygone prescriptions are always cheaper at rates, very less powerful but trustworthy for long duration. I strongly agree
to
Suggestion
with
the saying and belief, "Old is Gold" as
such
, "Prevention is better than cure" and so, would recommend
,
Accept space
,
prefer and insist everyone to go for traditional medicine only with firm confidence and patience, if one wants a perfect
stamena
enduring strength and energy
stamina
stamens
.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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