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Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion?

#events #football #world #cup #occasions #tensions #emotions
Nowadays, there are
increase
Suggestion
increases
 in the number of competition among different countries and sports is one of the brilliant thing which represents our nation very well. It is a great opportunity for a
country
 to show its power and ability by international sporting occasions. I think popular events like the football world cup and other sporting occasions are essential in easing international
tentions
(psychology) a state of mental or emotional strain or suspense
tensions
tension
 and releasing patriotic emotions. To embark, I believe that international sports
is
Suggestion
are
 paramount and fruitful in easing
tention
(psychology) a state of mental or emotional strain or suspense
tension
 and releasing the patriotic emotions in a safe way. Sports are not only games, it is a feeling of emotions. International occasions play a vital role in
brought
Suggestion
bringing
 together of people of different countries. In tournaments, they
are compete
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are competing
have competed
 against each other in a
sportive
furnishing support or assistance
supportive
 way,
furthermore
, they are friendly to each other and shake hands after the
match
. In
olympic games
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the Olympic games
Olympic games
, national music is played
of
Suggestion
on
by
 that
country
 which wins the
match
 so it is releasing a patriotic emotions among the citizens of the
country
. Their countries are fighting against each other,
instead
 of
this
, they play international matches together without having a feeling of anger and
jealous
Suggestion
jealously
On the other hand
, sometimes, athletes do not control their temper and do fighting during the
match
 and citizens of the
country
 become angry if athletes do not give good performance and
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
lose lose
 the
match
,
then
 there anger is
change
Suggestion
changed
 into riots and strikes so sometimes it
is not happen
Suggestion
is not happening
does not happen
doesn't happen
has not happened
 in the safe way. To sum up,
government
Suggestion
the government
 should increase in the number of international sporting occasions because people are
more interact
Suggestion
more interactive
more interaction
 with each other by
this
 and it is
great opportunity
Suggestion
a great opportunity
 for a
country
 to show their abilities and it
also
 release patriotic feelings.
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