Should young people follow the older people’s examples or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Peoples
are divided
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divide
on opinions that
youngster
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youngsters
a youngster
should follow the
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
people’s
views whereas
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views, whereas
others thinks that they should challenge elder people’s views. Some
are argue
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argue
are arguing
have argued
that accepting the
view
of
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
people is good as they had
a
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an
experience in all the
field but
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fields, but
fields but
some says that challenging the
view
of aged people can
some time
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
sometime
help them to
discovers
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discover
the new things.
This
essay agrees that
youngster
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youngsters
the youngster
a youngster
should challenge the old traditions and discovers the new method and new way of solving peculiar problems. On one hand the accepting the
view
of
old
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older
people is going to help the young adults because they
has
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have
experience in that subject and had already
try
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tried
to
doing
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do
all the methods.
However
the young people are new to the problems and they can make any problem worse without knowing the full knowledge. For instant in industries older peoples are more important and they are allowed to take all the decisions has they know all the methods to mitigate problems or to avoid
accident
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accidents
an accident
that can occur over there, whereas young people without having full knowledge can cause more damage to the industry.
However on
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However, on
the
counter part
a person or thing having the same function or characteristics as another
counterpart
, challenging the old methods
of
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for
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
people can advent the new trick of solving the problems. The possibility of failure is
also
same but
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same, but
it is said that
person
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a person
people
can learn from their own mistake
thus
it is good to encourage them. University research has
shows
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shown
that
majority
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the majority
a majority
of new generations tends to discover new methods by challenging the old traditions and innovate new things. That’s why encouraging young minds will help to find simple and easy way of solving
specific problem
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specific problems
a specific problem
. In conclusion,
this
essay
agrees even
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agrees, even
though elder people having a good experience youngster should challenge their
view
for innovating new method.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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