Should young people follow the older people’s examples or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Peoples
are divided
on opinions that Suggestion
divide
youngster
should follow the Suggestion
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a youngster
elder
people’s advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
views whereas
others thinks that they should challenge elder people’s views. Some Accept comma addition
views, whereas
are argue
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are arguing
have argued
view
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elder
people is good as they had advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
a
experience in all the Suggestion
an
field but
some says that challenging the Suggestion
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view
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some time
help them to on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
sometime
discovers
the new things. Suggestion
discover
This
essay agrees that Linking Words
youngster
should challenge the old traditions and discovers the new method and new way of solving peculiar problems.
On one hand the accepting the Suggestion
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the youngster
a youngster
view
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old
people is going to help the young adults because they Suggestion
older
has
experience in that subject and had already Suggestion
have
try
to Suggestion
tried
doing
all the methods. Suggestion
do
However
the young people are new to the problems and they can make any problem worse without knowing the full knowledge. For instant in industries older peoples are more important and they are allowed to take all the decisions has they know all the methods to mitigate problems or to avoid Linking Words
accident
that can occur over there, whereas young people without having full knowledge can cause more damage to the industry.
Suggestion
accidents
an accident
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However on
the Accept comma addition
However, on
counter part
, challenging the old methods a person or thing having the same function or characteristics as another
counterpart
of
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for
elder
people can advent the new trick of solving the problems. The possibility of failure is advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
also
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same but
it is said that Accept comma addition
same, but
person
can learn from their own mistake Suggestion
a person
people
thus
it is good to encourage them. University research has Linking Words
shows
that Suggestion
shown
majority
of new generations tends to discover new methods by challenging the old traditions and innovate new things. That’s why encouraging young minds will help to find simple and easy way of solving Suggestion
the majority
a majority
specific problem
.
In conclusion, Suggestion
specific problems
a specific problem
this
essay Linking Words
agrees even
though elder people having a good experience youngster should challenge their Accept comma addition
agrees, even
view
for innovating new method.
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