Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some problems associated with reliance on computer and what are some of the possible solutions

Computer
act as
important machine
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an important machine
for students to do all the school related
work
, so most of the pupils depend on it.
However
the principle problem is
students allowing
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students, allowing
machine to do all the
work
for them without thinking for themselves and a possible solution
is
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are
to have stricter supervisions from
teacher
and parents.
Firstly
,
this
essay will discuss the problem that
computer
is acting as a spoon feeding for students to complete all their school
work
and the solution
of
Suggestion
to
this
issue is supervision should have on them by their mentors
Firstly
, the major problem of
this
issue is pupils take a help of
computer
for completing all the school works like assignments and
project
. As the result of
this
plural of "this"
these
students can’t think of their own for assignment and can’t improve their knowledge about the topic if they are getting all the information without taking any efforts for it. And
this
will not help them to face
competitive world
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the competitive world
. University research shows in Times of Bombay that 60% students complete their assignments with
help
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the help
of
computer
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the computer
a computer
computers
rather than completing themselves.
However
the solution for
this
assertion is parents or
teacher
should supervise their
work
and encourage them to complete assignment on their own.
However
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However, this
this
can help to improve their thinking ability and boost their
confident
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confidence
for
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in
doing their
project
independently. For instant working on
project
teacher
should ask the their students to think and make at least rough
project
and
then
take the help of
computer
if needed , so
this
can help them to improve their ideas and knowledge about the topics In conclusion, dependence of student on
computer
can be avoided by parents and
teacher
by supervising on them properly and encourage them to complete the
work
independently
Submitted by bhaveshripatil1996 on

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