Some people say that relationships should be based on honesty and trust. Others believe that it is sometimes necessary to be dishonest in order to maintain harmony. Which approach do you consider to be better in relationships and why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Human bonding is based out of the many impressions like attitude, being honest, showing gratitude and so on. Some blood relations like parents, children, siblings, grandparents
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does not
require much attention or expression directly, can easily
understood
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understand
as they are all emotionally attached to each other.
Moreover
, they can rapidly get through the disturbances, even when they occur either
intetntionally
with intention; in an intentional manner
intentionally
or mistakenly, due to the high levels of grasping
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at
one another. Whereas, few affiliations like friends,
third
parties, colleagues, neighbours,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
, require
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lots
of time to get an idea of mentalities of both sides, specifically in the case of
opposite gender
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the opposite gender
, as not two persons' thought will ever be identical. Chances of misunderstandings are very high and are common between
such
parties, in fact, may sometimes, lead to quarrels, impacting the friendship. In
such
cases, it is always the honesty which paves way to strong binding, along with utmost confidence and that which shall never give a chance even, for misconceptions. Maintaining truth ab initio of the relationship, creates a level of belief in
such
person after
certain period
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a certain period
of time, in line with
the firm
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firmer
presumption upon the person. Perhaps,
this
vitally supports, when
distrubance
activity that is a malfunction, intrusion, or interruption
disturbance
araises
, let's the focus of thinking the pros and cons letting the individual's mind
know
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knows
the truth.
Therefore
, the relationship shall
last
for long with a continuing veracity. At times, people
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tell
lies or hide some facts in order to give happiness to the other person.
This
will continue the relation only to
certain extent
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a certain extent
, until the matter comes out. But, it is very difficult to regain the legitimacy once
that is
dishonoured, as it is very tough task
to
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for
any one
any person
anyone
to take
such
hard things; mainly to those who has emotional bondings.
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question word; what is the reason
why
I always
beielve
accept as true; take to be true
believe
and follow the saying, "Honesty Is The Best Policy" which is considered, recommended, encouraged and remarkably cherished
for ever
for a limitless time
forever
.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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