The government is spending a lot of money to discover life in other planets some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money Addressing problems of public to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is commonly believed that pouring a lot of the governmental resources to unravel universe is
absolute waste
Suggestion
an absolute waste
of them,
however
they better be utilized for public welfare. I agree that
bulk
Suggestion
the bulk
of the governmental finances should be directed to meet basic needs of society, but
space
exploration
also
holds importance.
To begin
some argue that expenditure of resources to explore
universe
Suggestion
the universe
is
total waste
Suggestion
a total waste
of
them
an instance or single occasion for some event
time
.
However
, I opine, acquiring the knowledge of
universe
Suggestion
the universe
hold a significant importance in fields of sciences. By launching satellites
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
space
scientists are able to uncover the remarkable Knowledge about weather and survival conditions on other
space
bodies.
This
is helpful in one way as we predict
the worse
Suggestion
the bad
weather disasters Beforehand and can make preventions and
furthermore
, in case when all the earth resources will deplete and population will exceed the earth capacity we will have a chance to migrate
to an another
Suggestion
on to another
to on another
planet with survival
facillities
. For instance, NASA launched a satellite
on
Suggestion
of
to
Mars in 2008 which discovered, the
foot prints
a mark of a foot or shoe on a surface
footprints
of human survival and along with
presence
Suggestion
the presence
of gasses essential for human survival
.
Accept space
.
According to
an other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
school of thoughts, government should spend generously to contribute to
public good
Suggestion
the public good
. I agree with
this
suggestion because
space
exploration is
highly expansive project
Suggestion
a highly expansive project
the highly expansive project
that needs huge investment
hence
, developing countries like us better direct their finances to improve living standards. As we are lacking in basics like clothing, food, education and employment it is the need of government to funnel tax payers money to more down- to- earth projects. Reforms should be introduced which are crucial to
welfare
Suggestion
the welfare
of society
such
as free education and economical
health
care.
For example
, Imran khan introduced
health
program in 2011 in which poor people were provided with
health
cards to seek free
health
care. To conclude,
government
Suggestion
the government
on his
first
hand should try to provide basic facilities to public as
this
is more significant and
then
pour money for
space
venture as its
second
priority.
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