Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In our modern world, many people think that
disappearance
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the disappearance
of flora and fauna has been an alarming issue, while others believe we are coping with other environmental disasters that are more serious. From my perspective, if I have to choose a nature problem to deal with at present, there is nothing except
climate
change
and global warming, which are in my utmost consideration. On the one hand, the development of trees and wild or domesticated animals are in danger. It is needless to say that the number of animals and plants have significantly decreased compared to those in a decade ago. The more our population is all over the world, the fewer green trees and animals are.
As a result
, our scientists are researching many experiments to help these objects feasibly adapt to
environment
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the environment
.
In addition
to
this
, the price of foods has a tendency to be higher than ever and the main reason is the loss of popular flora and fauna in the wide regions. Foods plays a crucial role;
therefore
, the lack of it has a huge impact on our existence.
On the other hand
, I agree with those who argue that we should consider other environmental problems,
such
as
climate
change
and global warming on
the higher
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the highest
priorities. The temperature on earth is at alarming levels and people is
facing
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faced
with the hottest weather than before.
This
can lead to not only the death of plants or
animals but
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animals, but
also
human beings’ health are in a dangerous situation. We can observe hundreds of victims who suffer skin cancers and other
health fatigue
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health, fatigue
cases related to
climate
change
on TV programs every day.
Moreover
, in recent years, there are more and more accidental storms and catastrophes that can damage the survival of humans and our eco-habitat. We should not underestimate these vital problems and need immediate solutions to address
this
. In conclusion, even though both these points of views have their own reasons, I personally agree that we need to give short-term and long-term resolutions for more important environmental matters, including
climate
change
and global warming.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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