Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

For many people, working for big co-operations or worldwide companies
is
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are
have been
are being
always a great chance for their life while someone does not think so. They decide to open their own companies
or
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
exactly, to be a self-employed. In
this
essay, I will give the reasons why and the drawbacks of
this
phenomenon.
Firstly
, it is clear that today, the multinational companies or well-known groups is not the only destination which can help people have well-paid jobs anymore. The development of technology support people seeking out their opportunities on the Internet easily than ever.
Therefore
, they can work from home and choose their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
jobs, deal their salaries with partners.
Moreover
, they do not need to commute to offices and facing with a variety of issues
such
as traffic jam at rush hours, the increase of petrol price. One more reason people choose
this
job because they can work with flexible time and for someone, who love working alone they will avoid many seriously
conflict
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conflicts
.
On the other hand
, there are still many disadvantages when you want to be a self-employed
instead
of working for a company. Obviously, working alone means that you could not communicate or discuss your problems with others and
also
can not
can not
cannot
expand your
friend
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friendship
circle.
Therefore
, you will not receive the
supportance
from other people. What is more, when you decide to be a self-employed you could struggle with many difficulties which you can solve more easier when learn from the experiences of seniors. In conclusion, working for a big co-operation or a company is always the best experiences for each person, while there are still more and more people want to work alone by themselves to suitable with their personalities.
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