In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

Nowadays, many married couples in developed countries tend to give birth to a
baby
late
coming at a subsequent time or stage
later
in life.
This
phenomenon becomes even more significant in
this
era. In
this
essay, I intend to discuss the impact of
this
problem
along with the sources for
this
issue. Chief among the causes of
this
problem
is the Morden lifestyle. Today's men and women are both knowledgeable and strive for excellence in workplace. They spend much more time on average on studying and working than the previous generations.
Consequently
, they rarely consider their future with their partner. Another contributing factor is the use of money. Due to the fact that the living standard is unreasonably high in some countries, growing up a child form a
baby
to an adult might takes you a minimum of £700000.
Therefore
, people wouldn't think of having a
baby
until it seems to be affordable to them. The possible effects of
this
problem
includes
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include
decrease
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a decrease
in labour population and generation gap between children.
First
of all, society may not have enough young people to work; especially the occupation that requires a large amount of energy,
such
as
construction worker
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a construction worker
. If
this
happens, the efficiency of working will be slower and may influence the growth of business around the globe.
Secondly
, parents may find it hard to communicate with their children due to the generation gap between them. If parents cannot handle
this
issue properly,
argument
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an argument
arguments
may occur which can alienate teenagers from their families. More vitally, teenagers would rather talk to others when they have difficulties, but not their parents. In conclusion, there are many causes and effects
on
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of
this
issue;
nevertheless
, human have the right to decide when to give birth to a child.
On the other hand
,
Government
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the government
the Government
can encourage
couple
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couples
by giving rewards
on
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of
for
having a
baby
if
this
problem
gets more serious in the coming future. 314 words
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