Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates to get better job, other belief there are much wider benefits of university education for both indivisual and society. Discuss views and give your opinion

The majority of the pupils are striving for higher qualifications. It is often argued that, the sole purpose of university education is to pursue a good post whilst,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
disagree, and think that, having a professional degree is beneficial to both individual and society. I strongly concur with the notion that, the university helps in individual and collective well being.8 On one hand, people believe that, getting higher education is the key to secure the best position. Because we are surviving in a competitive world, where competency of a person is judged on the basis of his degree rather than other qualities.
However
, I disagree with
this
opinion as, certainty to get a particular service not only depends upon knowledge, but
also
require technical skill and good previous experience in the specific field.
For instance
, a company dealing with information and technology will prefer to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
a candidate, who had been working in the same field for
long time
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a long time
, rather than a person who had recently got graduated.
On the other hand
, some argue that, having a graduation degree contribute to personal and social welfare. I too agree with
this
,
firstly
, in big institutes one
have
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has
to interact with so many different personalities,
in addition
, they have to overcome various challenges like financial and educational stresses which give him an opportunity to grow as a person.
Such
a groomed individual in turn serves the nation and elevates the economy of the country.
For example
, India is well known for the best hepatic surgeons, all over the Asia,
hence
, people across the countries, visit them for the liver surgeries and transplant, in
this
way they earn individually and
also
add a lot to the country’s reserves. In conclusion, higher education not solely aim for perfect job opportunities, while, it is too helpful for people and country in order to built finances
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