Some people believe that the newspaper is the best way to learn about news. However, others believe that learning about news through other media is more effective. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Opinions are divided on whether the best approach to know about news is newspapers or other media
such
as
internet
Suggestion
the internet
is more effective
.
Accept space
.
Although
the newspaper plays an important role in accessing to news. I believe that
internet
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the internet
,
Accept space
,
TV and other media are more effective to inform people about what is happening around the world. On the one hand, the newspaper is much
reliable
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more reliable
as newspapers have many professional journalists see it as their duty to differentiate between true news and fake news.
Moreover
, the newspaper is the easiest approach to
access
to news due to the wide distribution of newspapers.
In contrast
, there are lots of people who have no opportunity or are unwilling to
access
to
Internet
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the Internet
, like the poor and the elderly.
Consequently
, they have no choice but to read newspapers to know about news. In view of these reasons, some people believe that newspapers
is
Suggestion
are
still the best way to learn about
news
Suggestion
the news
.
On the other hand
, other media like
internet
Suggestion
the internet
has its own incomparable advantages.
Firstly
,
internet
enables people to have
access
to news in real time on different devices at any place, which provides much
efficient
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more efficient
way to
access
to news.
In addition
, people can share articles they have read and express their opinions on social media.
For example
, there are tons of people who are happy to share news on twitter and Facebook
everyday
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every day
. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that learning about news by browsing news websites on the
internet
is more effective than by reading newspapers due to the timeliness and efficiency of the
internet
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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