Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.

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Globalization has

incresed

made greater in size or amount or degree

increased

integration between nations in term of economic

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social and cultural aspect

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Some people

considers

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consider

that

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these influences are beneficial

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while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

suggest it might

reduces

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reduce

national identity

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We will discuss both views in

upcoming paragraphs

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the upcoming paragraphs

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this

age of technology people have

acess

the right to enter

access

to film

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art

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art, culture

culture

and different aspects of other countries. International trade has its own immense effect

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might helps

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might help

in the creation of jobs.

This

help

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helps

people to buy and sell different products at

competative

involving competition or competitiveness

competitive

prices

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Lets take example of agriculture through

this

international trading it is

hepling

an individual quantity of food or drink taken as part of a meal

helping

formers

a person who operates a farm

farmers

to find a world market

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Similar is the with cultural exchange.It allows people to meet others belonging to different countries to eliminate misunderstandings between countries and impress them by your

culture

and hospitality

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But other people have different views,.They gave argument that

this

is affecting our identity and demolishing our

culture

For example

, nowadays

holliwood

the film industry of the United States

Hollywood

movies are preferred in different countries and

this

leads to fading of film industries of different countries

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Childs

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Children

who

tends

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tend

to adopt easily these movies are affecting their brain and behaviours

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so they are ignoring their national

culture

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To some extent they are

right but

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right, but

refers to the speaker or writer

truely

in accordance with truth or fact or reality

truly

belives

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that it depends on us

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and if we are exchanging

culture it

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culture, it

does mean that it

diminiah

decrease in size, extent, or range

diminish

our national

culture

or identity.Protecting

culture

and tradition depend on us and it would not be harmed by international relationships

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1Word repetition
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Topic Vocabulary:

globalization
cultural exchange
economic growth
cultural homogenization
national identity
cultural diversity
international trade
investment opportunities
tolerance
cultural preservation
traditional values
global influence
cultural dilution

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