Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.

Globalization has
incresed
made greater in size or amount or degree
increased
integration between nations in term of economic
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social and cultural aspect
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Some people
considers
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consider
that
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these influences are beneficial
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while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
suggest it might
reduces
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reduce
national identity
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We will discuss both views in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
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In
this
age of technology people have
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the right to enter
access
to film
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art
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art, culture
culture
and different aspects of other countries. International trade has its own immense effect
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It
might helps
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might help
in the creation of jobs.
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help
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helps
people to buy and sell different products at
competative
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
prices
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Lets take example of agriculture through
this
international trading it is
hepling
an individual quantity of food or drink taken as part of a meal
helping
formers
a person who operates a farm
farmers
to find a world market
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Similar is the with cultural exchange.It allows people to meet others belonging to different countries to eliminate misunderstandings between countries and impress them by your
culture
and hospitality
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But other people have different views,.They gave argument that
this
is affecting our identity and demolishing our
culture
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For example
, nowadays
holliwood
the film industry of the United States
Hollywood
movies are preferred in different countries and
this
leads to fading of film industries of different countries
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Childs
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Children
who
tends
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tend
to adopt easily these movies are affecting their brain and behaviours
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so they are ignoring their national
culture
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To some extent they are
right but
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right, but
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I
truely
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
truly
belives
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that it depends on us
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and if we are exchanging
culture it
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culture, it
does mean that it
diminiah
decrease in size, extent, or range
diminish
our national
culture
or identity.Protecting
culture
and tradition depend on us and it would not be harmed by international relationships
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