Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have?

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era of technological advancement,

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the print and electronic media is becoming a vital source of information for

general public

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the general public

, yet people are having doubts about authenticity of

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the news

. People should

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the correspondents for their hard

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as disinformation are generally from managerial levels and reporters should

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be well educated and aware of their responsibilities to excel in their

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. It is a well-known fact that journalism is not an easy

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as they have to risk their lives and

work

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hard to update their audience and readers about different situations, so we should acknowledge their

work

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and boost their confidence by trusting them. As no one is flawless, so they can

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make mistakes but these are not deliberate and margin of error should be given to them.

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Moreover most

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Moreover, most

errors

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the errors

are from content managers or owners, so

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should not affect the credibility of a reporter.

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, recently in Pakistan, a well-known newspaper published some news about a political party which later on proved false, on investigation the fault was of the

proof reader

someone who reads proof in order to find errors and mark corrections

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, not the journalist. The correspondents should

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take responsibility to win the

trust

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of their followers by opting some qualities.

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Firstly they

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Firstly, they

should have proper knowledge of their

field

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, as some people are joining media without having adequate knowledge of

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field

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and the result is

overall bad image

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an overall bad image

the overall bad image

whole community

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the whole community

whole communities

a whole community

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, they should do research about every news before presenting to the people, as in

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fast paced age, everyone wants real news, not breaking news.

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, many surveys conducted in various media houses have shown that there is a remarkable rating difference between shows of professional anchors and nonprofessional ones. To conclude, currently many people are relying on

media

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the media

for

informations

a message received and understood

information

despite of their reservations on their genuineness. But we should

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journalists for the hard

work

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and efforts they

made

engage in

did

for

us but

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us, but

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have thorough knowledge of their

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and circumstances.

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win

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trust

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the trust

of people.

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