People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
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city
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life
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contiune
with continue a certain state, condition, or activity
continue
contain
invidual
a human being
individual
life
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city
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bring
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life
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life
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the govern support the people for immigrating to rural areas.
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
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city
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challenge
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could make
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expect
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these areas
another
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city
which they produce air pollution. Citizen Use synonyms
never stop
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never stops
produce
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city
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destroys
life
which is animal and flora. Use synonyms
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food unearth new medical problems a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
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expenses
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people consume a lot of time during work. Use synonyms
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may be earn
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may earn
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proportianolly
as earned. So, it is a good idea for choosing to live in to a proportionate degree
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out
beyond the boundary of; external to
outside
side
of cities.
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In
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contrast of
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contrast, of
city
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give
to people a lot of facilities Suggestion
gives
such
as; medical, schools, museum or different social Linking Words
activites
. But, the thing is, main services supply is the important immigration the people any specific behavior
activities
to
Suggestion
in
villages
.
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the villages
govern
improve quality of services, people Suggestion
governing
may be change
their Suggestion
may change
environmet
. The citizen could be prefer small town while finding the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
opportunities rural areas
as equal as in Suggestion
opportunities in rural areas
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city
...
Suggestion
the city
a city
cities
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