People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

Most of people deal with that the attractive
side
of big
city
life
is sufficient to
contiune
continue a certain state, condition, or activity
continue
contain
with
invidual
a human being
individual
life
.
However
, the
city
bring
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brings
along various problem beneath dark of
side
which reveals over population, traffic, pollution, havoc on natural
life
, low food quality and high
life
expenses. In my
opanion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opening
the govern support the people for immigrating to rural areas.
First significant problem
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The first significant problem
is over population. It has
effect
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an effect
on traffic
,
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,
loud, and
.
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.
Initially
, the
crowden
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crowd en
road and
strees
look at with fixed eyes
stares
stores
streets
directly effect on
vast majority
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the vast majority
of
city
residents.
On the other hand
, most of people are passing time on the road which
challange
take exception to
challenge
to arrive one point to another.
Moreover
, the traffic
could be make
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could make
loud in the
city
expect
take exception to
except
at nights. Unfortunately, some big cities is not
slept
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sleeping
on
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at
night, so
,
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,
the sound is never
end
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finished
finish
this areas
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this area
these areas
. The
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
issue is pollution. The
manufactoring
a business engaged in manufacturing some product
manufacturer
manufacturing
builds establish on
edge
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the edge
of the
city
which they produce air pollution. Citizen
never stop
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never stops
produce
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producing
the chemical via their cars, or individual usage. The
life
of
city
destroy
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destroys
to closer natural
life
which is animal and flora.
Thus
, the quality of
healty
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
food unearth new medical problems
such
as cancer,
asthm
respiratory disorder characterized by wheezing; usually of allergic origin
asthma
.
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.
the
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The
last
problem is
high
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higher
taxes and
expencess
amounts paid for goods and services that may be currently tax deductible (as opposed to capital expenditures)
expenses
. In the big
city
people consume a lot of time during work.
Although
citizen
may be earn
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may earn
much money than rural
side
, the expenses drain the money
proportianolly
to a proportionate degree
proportionally
as earned. So, it is a good idea for choosing to live in
out
beyond the boundary of; external to
outside
side
of cities.
In
contrast of
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contrast, of
all, the
city
give
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gives
to people a lot of facilities
such
as; medical, schools, museum or different social
activites
any specific behavior
activities
. But, the thing is, main services supply is the important immigration the people
to
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in
villages
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the villages
. In short, if the
govern
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governing
improve quality of services, people
may be change
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may change
their
environmet
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. The citizen could be prefer small town while finding
opportunities rural areas
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opportunities in rural areas
as equal as in
city
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the city
a city
cities
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