Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Other say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Of late, a new technology has been emerged and most of
movie
lovers
has seems
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seem
seemed
to be adapted to it. A numerous websites started streaming the movies and TV series on online
for example
like Netflix or Amazon Prime. As the trend
continue
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continues
to grow, few people do argue that there is no need
go
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to go
to the
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
as they can watch the
movie
in their mobile anytime and anywhere. I shall discuss by views from both the sides and I will come up with my opinion on
this
. There are plenty of flexibilities and comforts if we watch the films in phones or tablets.
First
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The first
of its many kinds is time. It allows us to watch the stream the movies anytime we wanted and we don’t necessarily at a stretch. We can pause the
movie
anytime we want and can restart it later.
On the other hand
, with cinema it is not the case. Will have to complete the film in a given time.
Second
would be the cost factor. Subscriptions to any web casting sites is cheaper rather going to
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
. Few sites offer one-year membership with unlimited movies in a range of $9-$15. If we choose
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
theatre
features
, we might end up spending $20 each for every
movie
. On top
this
, parking changes in films are extra.
However
, we defiantly miss the essence and feel of the movies and sound system is an extra added value in the
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
features
. The other drawback of watching it in
hand held
small and light enough to be operated while you hold it in your hands
handheld
devices is spoilers. Will get to know all the story, twist, script and even the performance before the hand, which I keen to avoid. Though casting in tablets is less expensive, we miss the entertainment of being
watch
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watched
with friends and families. When I
pay
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paid
a visit to
theater
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the theatre
theatre
a theatre
last
time, I had a great fun with my mates. If I chose the other way, I would have definitely missed out on the fun we had. In a
nut shell
the shell around the kernel of a nut
nutshell
, there could be few benefits involved if we watch the movies in personal devices
such
as mobiles or tablets.
However
, it is not advisable if someone
want
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wants
to have more fun and would like the enjoy the feel of cinema. In my opinion, I would always prefer to go to plays rather watching online.
Submitted by srilakshmi1390 on

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